/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2155536
personally i think that either you stylize or you don't. the inbetween will always look a bit uncally valley-ish. be aware of what you want to achieve. do you want something stylized like kronprinz or do you want it to look relistic? be aware of it.


>hairline
>face was generally too low. head had animu proportions
study the shape of the skull more and this will get better.

>neck, trapezius
>nose was too low, nose was behind the chin.
>ears were elf-like

>which side is the face facing?
this is again that typical mistake where the face is proportioned in a way where it's a mix between front, and 3/4 view.
see http://i.imgur.com/SrHiJa9.jpg

>eyes
some tips for the eyes: the next time you study, try to be aware of the upper and lower eyelids seperately. try to see a more distinct shape, in your original it was rather bland and formless.
making the upper eyelid thicker always helps~