/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Anonymous Sat Nov 3 20:48:38 2018 No.3665410 [View]
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As I said, to some Anons on this board before, I listened to the critiques over the writing a long time ago, and in this page we establish Max's overall goal.
With this, the plot will no longer be meandering, due to what Sally does in the last two pages of the interlude.

That being said, while the art in this page is old, I'll be happy to take any feedback to hopefully improve it further.

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