/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4014132
how about the eyes put together, does it at least have a decent "anime" style going for it. I can fix the other flaws easily but its always the eyes that fucked me up and I can never get it looking "anime" enough.

extra questions so i can incorporate it into my studies time after Hampton studies.

>too round like a toddler
how so, i never really took anime seriously but tried to copy what i see in an anime book i found in a shop that has a nice style i wish to copy. Even the eyes are a rip off of it
>hair looks stiff as fuck
hair has never been my strongest thing with anything. but may you redline it to show me if you have the time.if not its fine
>try using a ref and practice from there
will do, also can i still used that shitty book i got. some pages looks like 2000 shitty anime are but 80% looks amazing and is a style i wish to copy. should i copy the picture and whatnot