/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

So in a desperate attempt to make my shit slightly more appealing to normies I decided to poorly copy the latest League of Legends splash style, I can't even do that right, I'm too old to know what kids like anymore, or perhaps that's an excuse and I'm just a boring prick. Thing is I'm literally a refugee (of the spic variety, running from commies) and I depend on my pathetic art to survive and help out my old parents in the motherland. I don't know what to do /ic/, but at any rate, any critiques? In all honesty I won't change shit since I already spent two nights doing this and I don't charge nearly enough but you guys know your stuff and I'd really appreciate some insight on where are the areas I need to focus more in order to improve. Thanks a bunch guys.