/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2916284
that's a very detailed feedback thanks!
i tried to follow pretty much everything you pointed out so i've cleaned up the outline,improved shadows/highlight a little,added a px as eye reflection so now she seems alive,added nose and i hope something that look like a cheek,about the pose probably i can't change it because is suppose to be a T pose for someone else

in B tried to add more shadow to nose but it didn't work out,C face's shape is slight different and i think i like it better