/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4902122
The likeness, poses and expressions in your drawing are super well done. tells a nice story. (ignore my poor pose/expression/likeness etc. im too autistic for that)
Dont see this as a direct improvement btw, just a few directions to look at. (The way i wouldve solved those problems).

I think the main problem youre facing is, the guesswork youre basing your lines on when unsure about structure.
Maybe a good exercise would be (what i would do), to try to convert a photo into linework and really make the forms read.
Thinking about lineweight and where maybe NOT placing a line can convey information better than actually placing it.

(And about the time thing: id not worry too much. youll get faster as you get more experienced)