/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3295353
I gotta say, you pointing out the fact that I was leading the viewer off the canvas was the best tip I've gotten so far. It forced me to knock the whole thing down, and rearrange the pieces. I even managed to turn it into a vertical composition, which I always want to do while making environments (horizontal comps can be so bland).

The left side is empty at the moment, but there will be a happy little researcher dawn by the geothermal pool, and some looming features in the distance.

I also need to keep an eye on the balance between the left and right midground (not counting the big shrooms), it's a bit too even for my liking as it stands now.