/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I wanna work on a small mini-comic for something I'd like to make a larger series on (but obviously I need practise with smaller pieces first). I need to get better at drawing people and apocalypse gear (premise is a post-apocalypse where the apocalypse is that the world is covered by a huge thick layer of giant dead arthropods, nobody knows how or why it happened and just have to deal with giant insects and the less-insecty-things that live deeper in the layer).

Here's some work I did on an OCT a while ago, any thoughts? Full thing https://imgur.com/a/TEjGfd3

Got involved in that KSBD competition, hadn't really tried making a proper comic before so I don't have experience with panelling or making conversations seem natural.

Thoughts, advice? This is the first page but imo the best one.