/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Something id like to finish as I started it few months ago, but had to stop working on due health reasons, any tips how can I improve it? I tried to tone down the clothing design as it was overcomplicated, now it looks like lingerie which I dig.

1. 27
2. Studied some graphics design, but didn't graduate as it was worthless.
3. IT, so I'm doing okay for now
4. I do have a girlfriend who constantly tells me to give up drawing as I'm not serious
5. Well not really drawing currently as I had wrist surgery five months ago, still recovering.
6. Three days ago and now my wrist hurts like hell
7. Don't know, I try to mimic g
ame art style, and have some anime influences
8. Serious lack of discipline and procastination, also never bothered with fundamentals