/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

first time really drawing a none cartoony or scribbly face
trying to do some art for a /tg/ kinda game my bf's friend's ground is doing on Sundays (not vtm, but like the newer one?). just wanted to do some char art but ended up doing an actual face. The char is spose to be chinese.
It's not done, but how bad is it so far?
I know the mouth is p bad and I'mma re do it, but anything else I should work on too?
also I have no idea how to hair, any tips for that would be great as well.
doesnt need to be prefect, 95% of the group cant even draw a stick man, I'm just kinda doing this for fun and something to work on my art skills with.