/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

see very little photobashing around here so im sorry in advance if this is the wrong crowd to post this at.
I dont really like the image but I have a hard time pinning it down. Give me your worst.

>>2572961
looks really good so far, keep at it

>>2572887
if that face is supposed to scream at the viewer, make his eyes/eyebrows join in on that, the jaw just looks like its hanging. A sharp light from the right, eg rim light would be good here, the right side of the first two creatures in particular just drowns in blackness. You could also up your presentation by a lot by putting a slightly lighter box behind all these figures, giving it some graphics to connect them etc