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I don't think you should care so much about the rules for now. In fact, downscaling your images so much only hides the truth, which hinders your growth. Resizing them to 2000xsomethingsomething would be still fine, I guess.

Upon a closer look, the face isn't as good as it looks when it's small.
The eyes are slightly uneven, but what kills them is the huge difference in their shape. Purple lines equal the width of one eye. They have even width indeed, but they have too much space between them and their positions relative to the middle vertical line differ too greatly to be written off under the pretext of a slight horizontal angle. The shape of the nose is a bit strange, but it could work if you move the nose to the right (of the picture). Right now, the nose suggests that his head is turned slightly to the left side of the picture, while the eye direction suggests that he looks straight at the viewer, and everything else shows that his head is turned to the right of the picture. The green line is the perfect middle line if he's facing the viewer directly. Be very careful about hairstyles too. More often than not hair follows the outlines of the skull, so the top of it is, naturally, shows where the top of the skull is horizontally. When a viewer sees such a hairdo, he'll likely sense that something's off. Finally, the wavy line indicates where the bottom of his ears should be in this angle.

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