/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4060575
You megachad, this is awesome.
Still gonna get critiqued though
- some hands are dodgy and wonky or palm area out of whack
- thighs are a little unconvincing
- her pose, though supposed to be languid, comes across as a little boring and the perspective on her is unambiguous and /beg/ tier
- shading is a little flat and uninteresting. Maybe try being more painterly, break out a set of gouache and watch a Jeff Watts tutorial to add some interest to the way you render
- watch some tangential lines eg next to her head
- expression and outfit is just a little boring and generic

Don’t get me wrong, I love it and you have so much potential and a great eye. Never give up!!!

>>3931120
>butthurt idiot who paid for artschool