/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

The first before and after is a big improvement!
So congrats! It flows much better, not so stiff anymore.
Don't give a shit about them saying shit like "the first was better, it's stylized" because if you don't have strong fundamentals you won't have anything to build on.
That is such bullshit advice, damn. Every big artist learnt proper anatomy, and to capture the object drawn accordingly to reality;
Before they turned to finding their own style and expressing themselves through the style.
Many people draw stylized cause they can't draw otherwise... Those people will sink to the bottom. If you want to rise, grind hard- though you'll never be able to catch up with those who started early.
So I recommend finding a good art school in your neighborhood and turning to a teacher- for good critique and stuff, you know. You'll learn best from a professional, preferably someone working on the field.
(Also, don't just draw lines but also draw in the shadows lightly, you'll navigate through the face and shapes much better. Don't just look at shadows and lights, but also learn what's under the skin so you understand what your drawing. Once you have that knowledge, it will get much easier to draw.)

There you go, I hope this was ACTUALLY fucking helpful. Fucking retards commenting such horrible advice.

Here, have a look at Picasso for example! I recommend looking at his early works and late works.

>>4150798
Too bad, it's essentially the tail end of pic related of one of comics' greatest artists