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I like how bold you are, don't lose that

there are a lot of problems with the construction and rendering but I will only criticize the subject and composition (I am still learning the second)

I assume you wanted something endearing and to show how immersed you are while creating this amazing and happy one piece world, but quite honestly showing your sad and lowly saturated and room and face is quite depressing. if that was the objective, it was not dramatic enough, not enough contrast.

now on the composition, it is messy, as you don't know where to look first or where the highlight of painting is. is the luffy your your face? in addition, there are to many breaks in your patining which make it difficult to guide the eyes. I would try to align the boat with the pen and your face to make the eye movement smoother.

if you decrease the lighting and the saturation on your face, it will make it more dramatic and depressing. if you want to show how glad you are while painting, perhaps I would take a completely different take.

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