/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1765064
Your proportions are a little off on the face.

They are WAY off on the torso; unfortunately my MS Paint skills are limited so I can't really redline that area.

In general, the head you drew is for a much larger torso than what she has. The shoulders are also unrealistically angular (they should be rounder). There is also meat on the human body between the neck and shoulder that you have omitted from this poor girl, which consequentially makes how you attached the neck to the torso look strange. Copy this pose in a mirror and you will see what I'm talking about.

Also, is she shrugging AND throwing her shoulders back? That's a very uncomfortable position (try doing it). It'd look much more natural if you lowered her shoulders to a resting position.