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nice job anon, you have good technique. it's very close to the original. the shadows aren't quite as dark as they should be and you're missing some key highlights on the dagger around the pommel and crossguard. other than that, look at the the rectangular light shape between her jacket just above her sash. the cast shadow from the jacket isn't distinct enough and the rectangle of light is too bright so that area kind of stands out unnaturally compared to the original.

i marked some areas where you might be misunderstanding how the artist is communicating through light

anyway, these are really small things. i don't think i ever did a study that matches the technique of the original so closely, so i think you did a really good job. i'd love to see you apply this in some original work

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