/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6477932
i did also draw that second one, i got no answer as to what you find wrong with the first tho
>>6478855
usually the part where it's drawn as an outline is towards the end of the sketch refining process, which is when i usually post stuff here, tho there's usually still interior details, it's just that midnights' hair is all black so i didn't put any in there, also thanks for pointing out dekus' arm, i didn't notice how thin i'd made the front arm compared to the back, should be an easy fix now that i see it