/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Whew, this is a lot of feedback.

>>4890914
Thank you! A search fat"oily fat girl" pulls up some good refs.

>>4890952
>>4891099
I think you're right, but I'm wondering if I'm too far gone to go back and alter things too much. I'd like to get it online tonight. Maybe I should shave down the thighs and hips.

>>4891011
>>4891020
>>4891850
Thanks for this feedback guys. It's still wip so a lot of the shading is stuff I blocked in quick before logging off for the night, but I agree there's too much range on some of the forms and the fact that it looks better under a filter from my phone proves that. I'll correct the problems highlighted, cheers.

>>4892152
That's the one.