/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5053738

>>4983840
>pillow shading
Don`t

>>4291110
I like your interpretation of her hair a lot!

1. You're relying on pillow shading and your lightscouce is inconsistent. You're afraid of strongly-edged shadows. I want you to locate the direction and intensity of your strongest lightsource (ie: the sun) and don't be afraid of having some hard-edged, saturated shadows.

2, your shadows are very muddy. I would suggest adding more warm colors/color variation to contrast the cold highlight colors. Try adding some splashes of color via overlay layer and fiddle with the opacity. Add some purples, greens, yellows.

3, The perspective of her crown doesn't match the rest of the piece.

4, Anon are you hiding her arms/hands because you don't like drawing them? You can't run forever! Her elbows/the outer part of her arms should still be partially visible in this position

>>2779648
>pillowshading
meme language pixel artists use for people who shade like trash

>>2628386

>>2544291
Also, the entire rendering seems to be made from the same texture ( the doll seems the same as raven skin, and her skin seems to be the same as her shirt, etc)

cdn.preterhuman.net/texts/art/Drawing/JD_Hillberry-Drawing_Realistic_Textures_In_Pencil.pdf

You can make it anon, you are more than halfway point there, make papa loomis proud

>>2294316

>>2268475
Broken back
Those shark legs
Light source apparently in fifth dimension

Most of the problem are from the shadows and weird poses

>>2000532

>>1916563
The bed looks more like a weird organic shape and doesn't have it's own form, looks like it's just placed to weirdly hold the bodies.

>>1916566
pillow shading is shading around the lines you've made without any reference to your light source.

>>1744159