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>>4187708

Holy shit, something I can actually help with.
I'm only going to speak on the topic of perspective, because it's the one thing I know. With respect to composition / anatomy or other elements of drawing, you'd probably want to ask someone else.

The core issue is that a lot of what you imply perspective-wise contradicts one another. Most glaringly, the location of the car would imply it should fall straight into the water.

There are many ways to fix this, including changing the convergence of the pier, moving the car forward and adjusting the perspective, etc etc, but the only thing that's important is that what's implied is consistent.