/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6568853
I think I'm going to be physically ill. Is this the end result of dysgenics? Literal feces/semen leaking mouth breathers? Marxism ruins everything.

After reading that I'm glad to be on this shitty board with all the crabs and pahjeets instead of at a "real" art school. I feel like I need to go draw some figures right now just to cleanse my soul of this vile filth. Hitler was right about modern art, we where all just too blind to see it.

>>6552118
Jesus Christ I would redline this but I'm phoneposting right now so sorry.
First of all you have to use a fucking ruler holy shit on God your convergence lines are crescents not lines.
Secondly of all you have to be precise and confident with your lines and ERASE when you make a godammn mistake! Seriously you need 8 fucking lines for each box in two point perspective! You have like 20 for the pelvis box?? Wtf man? Are you being payed per line? I can't even tell what the fuck is going on with the arms or especially legs; Jesus Christ please save us.
Also just look at the head box. Even from my phone I can see that the two convergence points are on the exact same line of the paper so why in heavens sweet mercy is the line at the base of the head box angled down to the right at 5°? I can't even tell if you thought that this was how the perspective worked or if you are just so sloppy that you meant to draw a straight line but failed?
Lastly in 2PP your vertical lines should be perfectly parallel (and straight).
You clearly need to get a book on perspective, start with 1P not 2P, and to have some respect for yourself by placing deliberate straight lines while using a ruler and an eraser (no light faggy non-committal lines and no fucking chicken scratching!)
Hope this helped good luck.