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>>1774751
Drawing shoulders well is about everything but the shoulders. The neck has to be in a good position, the trapezius has to shape the whole upper shoulder area. The chest, and the breast muscles are important. The way the arm connects on the back and the front is important. My mistake is visible there, it should probably not connect to the outline but to the wing muscle. I try to focus on the way the collarbones move when assuming the pose you're trying to capture. It says a lot about the position of the body. My skills are real shit but hope it helps.