/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2196046 here. Halp.

>>2196119
Neat colors, but you should look for some balance between cold/warm tones. Try to make cast shadows a bit colder so they really pop out and provide atmosphere. Look up Karin Jurick, I think you'll like his stuff.
Really digging the drawing itself, but honestly the background screams "unplanned", because of how tighter the trees and the girl are displayed.

>>2196083
Those look a bit short/chubby, check your aspect ratio, yo.

>>2196077
Did you trace that other drawing you've done for that anon on the previous thread? Because if you didn't, you might suffer from same-body syndrome.

>>2196073
Pretty cool idea, and the depth is well depicted. I can't decide whether the smudges around his tail are a good thing, but the kelp pillars are sure brushy in a positive manner. Also if this is the whole composition, I guess the mermaids could be placed a bit higher on the canvas.

>>2195963
This is somewhat uncanny, the second one looks like a mannequin. I guess it's the stiffness as others have mentioned. The clothes overall are pretty good, though, specially on the first girl.
I think you just gotta stop drawing "prefab" parts, look at how Girl 2 has one feet identical to Girl 3 and the other one identical to Girl 1. And both 2 and 3's torsos are exactly the same.