/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6702305
This one is hard, because you are talented enough to almost get away with it LOL. Yeah, I see what you mean, but the elbow is not the main issue. It is the torso the side oblique muscle is the only thing we should see. We shouldn't see her groin. That's forcing the pose too much. And then you start to seek other issues like the elbow, because you don't want to sacrifice the groin shot lol. And I understand that. I don't mind really, I think the pic looks awesome man.

I'll see about the big dude behind, first idea that comes to mind is making the pic bigger, to show him more clearly, but I like the composition as it is. The girl looks awesome already in the frame. Ill see. Maybe someone else can help as well.