/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4942461
I tried doing a small redline. I think what you have right now is working really well, so feel free to disregard this if it's not really what you're going for. what might help with building the cranium is if you added a little bit more volume to the back of the head. right now your head is very human and circular, which makes sense given the character, but dog heads do tend to have a flatter, ovular cranium mass. having some volume at the back might also make it easier to build out the neck, since it'd have more room and be easier to separate from the jaw and muzzle.
I think I lost the character-likeness in my drawing, but I hope you can still get something out of it. your style here reminds me a lot of that web cartoon 'A Fox in Space,' which also has very round, humanish heads, so what you have now is working if that was you intention!
two small things also: maybe you flipped the canvas, but I think the character has the eyepatch on the other eye. having the further eye obscured by the eyepatch might be a little easier for clarity too. in my redline, I thought one of his nipples was escaping up his chest, but looking at it now I think it's a scar lol