/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>7049671
Whatever >>7049805 said. Your drawing is really flat, and having a better foundation of 3d might go a long way for you. The linked channel does a decent job in explaining some of those concepts but I don't think all of the videos have eng closed captions. I tried my hand at giving it a proper construction to illustrate what I mean. Forgive me if I butchered your waifu, I just I hate re:zero. I think the composition also hurts being able to properly convey the nuzzling, but I could probably have done that better by rotating it a bit.