/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1794301

Will do, thanks a lot. Although I thought it was for lineart only but no complaints. I'll do it.

>>1794303

Yeah it's an obvious WIP, but thanks for the direction. I haven't been on /ic/ in a while, so forgive me.

>>1794293

I think I've done enough anatomical studies to help you out here. This is my first time critiquing someone on /ic/ so...

I think your biggest issue is that you're starting in the wrong place. I think you should learn anatomical composition before you start getting into the bigger stuff like dynamic posing. It's easy to tell mainly because of how disjointed things are. For example

1: You're clearly trying to draw a curved back but that gets thrown off by the gluteal muscles just popping out drastically.
2: When the arm is stretched out, the shoulder muscles kinda go along with it, try it out. They don't scrunch up like a shrug.
3: More or less the same issue as 1
4: And here the shoulder just kind of sinks in rather than being connected to the forearm as it should be
5: I'm confused by this
6: Same problems as 1 and 3

So basically your biggest issue is that you don't know how to compose the human body as one, fluid set of muscles that are connected rather than trying to pile together to fight each as their own entity.
tl;dr: Go back to the anatomy fundamentals and learn'em, good luck