/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I wanted to post the pages directly here, but when i exported they were more than 4 mb, and i want to try to sleep so...

I still need to make more things on the 3rd page, but i wanted to post to see how was looking so far, and for the page 2 that i don't know how to fill some white spaces without fucking it up (i mean with something that actually looks good, i'm sorry i'm sleepy i don't know what i'm writting)

https://imgur.com/a/sKl1fjS

Can i post a bit of dialogue/ narration/soliloquy to get an opinion/ revisionsinceimafilthyesl?

I think that my hand and my elbow is 95% cured now, but I got really depressed to draw something yet, so I came here to ask about how to better my engrish, i mean how to express myself more or learn more expressions, since I still remember what those anons said about the script

I wonder if that anon that said that my script was a bit clunky, and that anon that asked for my script to proofreading it (i don't know if they are the same anon or not) is still around, i was rewriting a few pages and I wanna see how it's going

My fucking back is killing me, and i'm just 22, please remember to take a walk every 30 minutes