/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2018858
It'd just...boring. It feels stiff and washed out and everything is too uniform. The background is one flat tone for the entire thing, but the rest of the image isn't getting a graphic enough treatment to pull it off. The seat has the feet touching the bottom of hte image and the leftside on the left edge of the image. The linework is completely uniform.

I think just introducing more variety would help. Get some dark accents in there, play with the lineweight, break up the flat shape of the background etc.