/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3904395
I wrote a script for my comic, and showed it to a few friends that I trust, and will now try to quickly go over and edit it to improve pacing and dialogue, since those appeared to be my greatest issues.
Finally once that is over I can get the pages done before May 15th, hopefully, I've made poor use of my time.
>>3904405
Opps, I keep forgetting to do this. Girls are just more I guess.

Anyway, one of you is the guy who kept replying to me and was very supportive of me, and I thought it was rude that I haven't done this earlier. I have an art server who's user base I like to pick out myself, to try to help cultivate a userbase focused around improving their art and keeping on track. It's quite active!
I would also like to see some of your own personal work besides just drawing of my characters (even if I really appreciate them).
If either of you wanna be in, just reply with your discord usernames and I'll DM you guys the link.
You'd be great additions to the server!