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>>3972788
I'm still a beginner too, but here's your problems:
>Little scratchy shit lines instead of long smooth lines
>You aren't thinking in 3D forms, so it looks flat.
>Because you are doing little scratch lines, you aren't planning out your strokes which leads to slight deviations and second guessing.
>You're probably copying from an anime image and just focusing on doing the outline of what you're drawing instead of simplifying it down to individual shapes and thinking about it in form
You don't even have to read all the "boring" stuff, just watch the video and follow the lesson on this page and your lines will instantly get better. Watch any other artist draw, they never draw with little scratches down the entire drawing. Even when they draw all "sketchy" it's still just one smooth line after another. Hopefully this helps.

https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/2