/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2538779
I think you would benefit more from light tutorials than from a critique if you are only asking for help on that. Light does not work like that--it does not shine in one visible area at that sort of brightness and not affect anything around it. Her color bones are offset, look quickly at a collar bone reference from different angles, they do not work how you positioned them. Your method of crosshatching for shadow is sloppy and rushed. You need to put more thought into this piece. I have said much advice on using crosshatching for shadow, it would benefit you to scroll through individuals using that method and what I've said to them. Where is the nose? They have no nose. The shoulder scribbles--it showcases just how sloppy the lined shadows are. Put more thought into it. Plenty of light tutorials are available.