/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1825046
oh me again.. also ditch any extra characters if they dont serve the narrative, for example, this could just be the meeting between her, and this creepy alien dude who lives there or whatever. the silhouettes you had in the fg were kind of pointless, and the second char further back in the image creates depth, but doesnt propel narrative. James kei told me something at one point, 1 is unique, 2 is a mistake, 3 is intentional. thats a good guideline for adding things in terms of repetition, if you added more characters it would tell a story that she perhaps went into some wood elven clan territory, and was ambushed, but with only two extras beside her, it is unclear.

also maybe add something by the guy that leads back towards focal point, then you will have a nice composition. i noticed this in one of jaimes pictures, will post after this one.