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>>4291576
Jaw line doesn’t match.
Forehead length changes.
Measure the facial features. To see if the distances match.
You’ll see the top and side are different.
Hair length on neck seems to change.
Bottom face is diagonal. His facial features push outwards instead of stay within the range established in the side profile.

Practiced coloring and shading.

>>4290992
Your octopus feels like a slime ball. Like a slime booger monster. Maybe some stronger glistening/reflections on him as well. Maybe even some liquor spilling out.
I really like the sketchy octopus. It feels like old timey drawings of sea monsters.
Is this supposed to be a cute drink representation of a martini?
Or an octopus that found its way into a martini glass?

Did some colors and light practice on a old red line.