/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Anonymous Mon Feb 29 23:09:32 2016 No.2422550 [View]
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>>2422521
If you're going for the egoraptor thing then that's fine. I would study perspective and life drawing more if I really wanted to get good though. Your backgrounds and compositions are really youtubey(arbitrary color choices, diverging perspective, little to no consideration for cinematography), and your characters lack weight and gesture. Studying film composition and color theory would be good for you too.
Here is a nice example how fundamentals can be applied to cartoony styles.
https://vimeo.com/152376671

Congrats on making 4 STONKING minutes of animation though. You're more productive than 95% of the posters in these threads. Keep it up.

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