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While not necessarily critique on the piece I'd say if you were concerned about the bike to perhaps, silhouette or thumbnail a bunch of bike designs out first, pick one you like and explore that to make sure you had it the way you wanted and built correctly before bringing in the girl on top and inking her out to a degree first.

The handlebars seem quite close to the dip in her body which is where I'm assuming the seat is and in that case the bike would be a very upright sitting position and be rather uncomfortable, even a cruiser or touring style motorbike has higher handle bars, plus there is no where for a drivers feet to rest from what I can tell which is important in both riding styles. if its a more sports bike style the seat would need to be further back to accommodate the body length.

something about the perspective feels off but i'm not qualified to point that out so I'm gonna stick to just the overall design and let someone else handle that

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