/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Please share any art that emulates this concept. It's oddly satisfying and I need more of it.

>>2962154

It depends, everything about this seems like a sketch. If this is a finished product:

Lines are scratchy, work on smoothing them out. She's THICC unless that's how you wanted her. There is no attempt at shadow or depth. Her ponytail should be more behind her head. Look at the scarf's tie point that is supposed to be perpendicular to her neck. Now look how the hair looks like it is in a 2d space. Her right eye is off, and her right eye wouldn't be showing that much if at all given the angle of the head and the fact there is hair. If her right knee guard on her boot is supposed to come out and hover over her thigh a bit the left boot should be higher. Her crouch is crooked, and her right leg should be up more, she is crooked and unsteady with an off center of gravity. Also her left arm is longer than her right. Her right hand is also not gripping anything on the sword's pommel. Her knuckles are just resting on it, else you need to redo the grip.