/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4222885
I am not sure what exactly she is doing so excuse me. I think she is hitting that bomb with a hockey stick maybe? If you want to make it like movement then have her be a bit unbalanced shift the weight on one leg and have her swing that stick (?) on wider arc like she i putting all force in that hit. Also do not have look at the camera, make her look at what she is doing, that also helps conveying the idea that she is in the middle of something.
Maybe like this?