/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4292011
>>4292119

Also perective on the J.F. Kennedy guy is fucked

(i am not that good at persective so critique of my critique is welcome)

Also , this video might help you (its about figure drawing but the perspetive things apply to the head as well)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8lp6gc4gjjY&list=PLq1TGG6lDQ2y6sm5ODEIPWZu8pBPpuN3E&index=4


Also the third drawings is the best one out of the bunch

My single objections are:

”mouth seems a bit too big and out of perspective”

”Right eye seems to slant into the right side”

”Left eye looks directly at the camera and breaks perspetive”

”and the switch from the side of the head to the front of the head might be a bit too sudden”


>reference had weird proportions
Pls pick better refference