/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3921969
I'd say so. That's a nice shading you got going for the hair!
The head seems too large though, and there's something bothering me about the neck.
The hair strand next to the neck is causing a tangent, which confuses the reader and makes him read shapes that aren't there.
For example, due to that tangent, the stray line you left in the neck's shading makes it look like the neck is very tiny.
Which might not be that noticeable to some but when you see it, it can be confusing.