/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Anonymous Wed Mar 4 05:35:58 2015 No.2003587 [View]
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>>2003541
This might help.
I think the pose is fine but there are things you can do to make it look more convincingly 3D.
Some of the things I did was angle the forearm and hand towards the viewer/
I overlapped her legs.
I showed her hair falling onto the ground and forming to the shape of it. Also it hangs around her face in a more convincing way.

also the boobies... I turned the torso more to emphasize them hanging towards the ground. Boobs are just fat sacks. You see anime all the time make them giggling messes, try to imagine a giggling mass hanging towards the ground, that's boobies.

I hope it helps, the redline isn't perfect but I hope it helps.

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