/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3521250
In the ref she is looking to our left, and slightly up. You have drawn her iris almost dead center (vertically) while few degrees at the top of her iris should be hidden, but the lower part should be completely visible, and not touching the lower eyelid (just a little bit of the white of the eye visible below the iris just a nudge).

Also you have quite neglected her skull shape - the overall shape of the face is quite alright but you NEED to define her orbital sockets (shadows under brow ridge etc.) and her temples (see how there is a beautiful soft edge going straight from her left ((our right)) eyebrow all the way up to her hairline).

Here's a little guide to simplifying the shape of her eyes. The ref image there is scaled little bit up so I lost some quality, and also I feel I put too thick lines on top of the ref so it seems clunky. But simplify the shape of the eye, look for angles and lengths of straight lines there.