/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2245267

hi /ic/ im the semibeginner guy from before; i had to redo everything cause i didnt think out the animation thru and it conflicted with how the game was going to work lol, i had to redo it and change his pose

so yeah here's a little proto anim showing the idle-to-run-to-runloop i need to get done. so far the idle's good and i kinda like the transition between idle and run but im not quite sure on the movement in the running loop. some critique and help would really come in handy. maybe i should make it faster by taking away some airtime? i was kinda aiming for cartoony so the airtime is kinda long

very few frames are filled in this anim, its at 24 fps btw.