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Anonymous Thu Nov 12 20:40:49 2015 No.2283190 [View]
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>>2283161
This is quite nice, but there are a few things you should work on.

It looks very rigid and generic atm, almost like you used a pre-scripted tool. Try experimenting with unconventional writing styles and punctuating from the elbow.

You also haven't considered lighting and it looks very two dimensional. Remember to consider planes when working on consonants. Your "i"s in particular, leave a lot to be desired.

Keep at it.

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