/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Also posting this one again for some feedback. Something about it feels unappealing. I think its the colours, I definitely struggle to colour in digital because of the range of choice. I normally draw in ballpoint so I pretty much limit myself to blue, black, and red. Also I have poor colour vision

Drew this succubus/vampire kind of deal

Finished this one up. Though as usual colour is definitely a big weak point for me. I don't have perfect colour vision but I also mainly draw with ballpoint so it's not something I worry about too much or have heaps of practice with. But it's such a strong visual with digital I would like to capitalise on it more effectively. I'm a fan of limited colour palettes for sure.