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>>2967605
going to give a really shitty redline, I'm on my laptop. the nose is too long, it's squashing the mouth down and it's not giving it enough room between the chin. the jaw seems small. the eyes seem a bit big. keep going with the loomis books and he'll tell you how to map the muscles on the face which makes it easier to set all the features. the nose looks kind of flat and planeless too.