/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Hello beg. These low skill studies are somewhat relaxing and fun. Its like i am finally beg enough to have fun while drawing. And it doesnt look like it but even these doodles are okay practice for making clean lines.

>>6463987
https://www.amazon.com/Franklin-Booth-Symphony-Alice-Carter/dp/1640410619
https://www.amazon.com/Treasury-American-Illustration-1881-1938-History/dp/0486242803
>>6463982
i like your enthusiasm anon. you are just doing master studies but you act like its something forbidden
>>6463923
my tip is to first make a tonal bar, kinda like i have in my own piece in top left. Other than that you got the right idea, you just want to have more values in your drawing
>>6463886
i know that feeling
>>6463860
very nice one, keep numbering your heads, i put my numbers in bottom right
>>6463775
simple, soulful, effective... i kneel tradchad
>>6463762
good effort. But next time you are drawing object like this, always draw it from 3/4 view. So that you can see at least two sides of it. It basically makes you train extra things while you draw: perspective and spatial awareness. I know its harder that way but even if you fail you learn in the end
>>6463749
dont be pussy and use thicker brush for that line confidence training
>>6463709
i dont see anything wrong, keep going
>>6462495
not bad at all, looks accurate and you even have somewhat unique way of rendering. Keep going
>>6460766
hard to tell you forgot to PYW
>>6459873
i was forced to buy pen grip (that rubber thingy small children sometimes use to force use the correct grip of the pen at school) to solve this. 10/10, easily the best 3 bucks i spent on art supplies.