/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1794434

are you going to make the right tower into something really awesome and breathtakingly designed? else i can only see the eye wandering to the sun popping in from the left and if there's nothing eyecatching there either it's gonna be a lame image, no matter how pretty the thumbnail reads (which it does).

>>1794470

lot i like about this but since this is /ic/ YOU AINT GETTIN NUNNODAT. so what i don't like: eye is pulled to turtlebrahs ass. that spotlight wrecks your composition. then i feel like you desperately need to show the left hand, no matter how little. to do that and add a compositional diagonal i did pic related. then head needed much more room to breathe. no matter how awesome that arm looks, head needs some space. so cropped out alot of the bottom to give top some room without making the image door-ratio. just some ideas, it's your image, you should follow what you feel is best.