/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2883081
>>2883086
Yes, at the moment the lines are clunky. I don't yet have the control to make them feel organic. I'll work on that. Glad to hear that the perspective and proportions are good. The image you posted is similar to how I draw the pose, and I see what you mean that it works but doesn't have flowing lines. Thanks for the feedback!


>>2883084
I think it's the cast shadow. It's drawn too hard and can blend better. The reference actually doesn't have the cast shadow sticking out as much as the drawing.

Here's the reference for those curious